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The next chapter he talks with his teammate in which he says “Well, actually, the zombies mutated into a variant I was already modelling the combat for” If you can't understand why this is bad story telling, let me spell it out for you:
There is no foreshadowing, no Chekhov's guns, nothing. The story is going balls to the walls with no conductor at the helm leading to what I believe are retroactive adjustments to the story such as the girl neighbor being...